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[livingdead]

@hinduguy long time no read.

busy tha saar.. just read a few posts once a while.. did I miss much?

 

[WAJsal]

Pls do!!
Would luv to read what my lil bro has penned down.

Will finish and share it later this day. I hope it's a good piece,first time i'm writing something like this.

 

[Levina]

Will finish and share it later this day. I hope it's a good piece,first time i'm writing something like this.

You're making me curious.
Post it soon.

 

[utraash]

@levina ,@utraash ,@Pomegranate , guys i was advised to start writing the other day and i took it.I have almost finished a piece i was wondering ,should i share it on PDF ?

We would love to see it .... Chote bhai....

 

[jamahir]

did I miss much?

no... the usual pdf nationalistic fights go on.

 

[Pomegranate]

@levina ,@utraash ,@Pomegranate , guys i was advised to start writing the other day and i took it.I have almost finished a piece i was wondering ,should i share it on PDF ?

Yea why not let me have a look at it .........

 

[WAJsal]

You're making me curious.
Post it soon.

One thing it will all be based on real account , so be prepared to be blown away .

 

[IrbiS]

One thing it will all be based on real account , so be prepared to be blown away .

Eagerly waiting

 

[Salik]

@Jaanbaz i can't see your reply in ring thread either, due to youtube content. Plz tell here what did you say.

 

[Armstrong]

@SvenSvensonov @Víðarr no reply to my post !

 

[WAJsal]

Thanks for tagging me!
That was a very sweet story.I loved the second half of the story when the gal came into picture. It felt as if I was riding on smooth waves of emotions.
So was she the crush you were talking about?
But hey you should not 've ended so abruptly, you called her a "mistake" without giving a reason.

Thank you i have achieved what every writer wants his readers to feel.To feel the emotions and all .
Shh,this is suppose to be someone else e account not mine,but yes.
Maybe i could write the second part of the story,will you like that?

 

[Levina]

Maybe i could write the second part of the story,will you like that?

Ofcourse!
I would like to read the complete story.

Btw why did you choose to reply here instead of your thread?

 

[DESERT FIGHTER]

National Anthem played on a Rubab:

https://www.facebook.com/video.php?v=708915242503263

 

[WAJsal]

Ofcourse!
I would like to read the complete story.

Btw why did you choose to reply here instead of your thread?

Stupid people,i would get replies such as you are too young blah blah blah.You know the type.
People are crazy.

 

[Levina]

Stupid people,i would get replies such as you are too young blah blah blah.You know the type.
People are crazy.

I think this is the Wrong forum to post it. That's it!

If you've a blog, or if could post on forum like PA, then you might get a more encouraging response.
For a 17yr old your story is very well written.

@Chronos is another guy on this forum who writes stories. He might be able to guide you.