@^ Jin
I appreciate the rhymes-n-verses by you - the passionate bard,
And Im eagerly waiting to see you as a famous soul, who has committed hard.
I know the peace when verses come out from your inner yelling words,
Its like the bliss of giving birth, when your inner passions reveal as singing birds.
I comprehend the dull pains inside you, until your inner passions uttered,
And I realize the impatience in you to share your feeling to whom you love hard.
Yes, I found a pure heart inside you,
And now the proof of it is - to me - your sincere view.
Do not worry, Jin, about the death ever,
Cos your soul-n-passion will breathe through your rhyme-n-verse forever!
-Skies
*Always good wish for good Jin,
Bro Skies,
Just Amazing, not in the sense that u have written my name there but it has rhytmic language, evoke an emotional response. You have great potential in writting if u claim it to be yours.
Just amazing bro.
Good luck