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@^ Jin


I appreciate the rhymes-n-verses by you - the passionate bard,
And I’m eagerly waiting to see you as a famous soul, who has committed hard.
I know the peace when verses come out from your inner yelling words,
It’s like the bliss of giving birth, when your inner passions reveal as singing birds.
I comprehend the dull pains inside you, until your inner passions uttered,
And I realize the impatience in you to share your feeling to whom you love hard.

Yes, I found a pure heart inside you,
And now the proof of it is - to me - your sincere view.
Do not worry, Jin, about the death ever,
Cos your soul-n-passion will breathe through your rhyme-n-verse forever!



-Skies




*Always good wish for good Jin,:)


Bro Skies,

Just Amazing, not in the sense that u have written my name there ;) but it has rhytmic language, evoke an emotional response. You have great potential in writting if u claim it to be yours.

Just amazing bro.

Good luck
 
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I wrote that for you Jin bro after a long time when I saw that you like to write poem and want to express your inner feelings.



*Google each line to find the original source, if u will get.
 
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You left me with no words, in your appreciation.

You are a talented man of our brother nation.

I always like people with talent.

Hoping, we will keep continue our chit chat in future.:)

Now m kit out and over n going to watch movie in Al ain Mall cinema.
 
You left me with no words, in your appreciation.

Jin bro, that wasn’t, exactly, appreciation,
-But the portrait of any young bard who is sunk under passion.
And I felt my past feelings-n-zeal when I saw your love,
But, where I’ve lost those now - still unknown!
Yes, with the elapse of cruel time-n-reality I’ve became a mere stone,
Now I’m so empty, so selfish, so complex soul - with no emotion!
But I’ve found the fire-flame-n-love inside you still alive-n-so strong,
So let them utter before your heart gone dry-n-barren without passion.
And, please, do not be silent-n-stunned to see my stupid freak notion,
I know, still many untold feelings left in you to make poetic expression.



-Skies :)
 
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Oh o, I'm not getting you, who is she and where she lives?

BTW, What is the meaning of "Dil Jale"?
 
Sorry your flight has been cancelled , infact all flight have been cancelled due to volcano burst
 
Give me blood ,i will give you freedom
Delhi chalo
Jai hind
-Netaji Subhash Chandra Bose
 
On a Continental Flight with a very "senior" flight attendant crew, the pilot said, "Ladies and gentlemen, we've reached cruising altitude and will be turning down the cabin lights. This is for your comfort and to enhance the appearance of your flight attendants."
 
flight attendant's comment on a less than perfect landing: "We ask you to please remain seated as Captain Kangaroo bounces us to the terminal."
 
Skies Bro,

I think our engagement in poetry rusulted in situational irony.

It was just a creative stunt dude.

If you are a literature student or teacher, you will understand it well.

And it was a happy ending i think, though fake one.

I hope we will carry another episode about another topic.:lol:

Good luck
 
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