Sher-o-Shairy

[Mutee]

unn kay khut may mujhi ghairo kay saalam atay hain
kiss qiymat kay ya naamay meri naam ataya hain
(mirza Dagh delhvi)

 

[Mutee]

daikh to dil Kay jaan say uththa hai ya dohuwan saa Kahan say uththa hai Ishaq Mir ak bhari phuter hai ya bojh kub tuj natawan say uththa hai (Mir taqi mir)

 

[Mutee]

Teri seeshay may Mai baqi nahi hai bata Kia to mera saqi nahi hai ? Kozay say milay piyasaay ko shabnum bakheli hai ya razaqi nahi hai (iqbal)

 

[GUNS-N- ROSES]

Teri seeshay may Mai baqi nahi hai bata Kia to mera saqi nahi hai ? Kozay say milay piyasaay ko shabnum bakheli hai ya razaqi nahi hai (iqbal)

mutee bhai wonderfull thread.

i will post my first sher which i had written wen i was in class 8th.

aap jo mehfil main aaye to samaa sa chha gaya humne kaha to kya kaha chaand bhi sharma gaya.

 

[Mutee]

mutee bhai wonderfull thread.

i will post my first sher which i had written wen i was in class 8th.

aap jo mehfil main aaye to samaa sa chha gaya humne kaha to kya kaha chaand bhi sharma gaya.

wow you ate the first one here to say something nice to me and what good sher u said when u were so young shows how high your intellect is come here everyday and write your sher I need more contributors on this thread this is for people like you my Indian friend !

 

[Mutee]

Oooo jub say dil haara oh budla ma saara ka saara umm sumthing like that i heard in a party not a sher but a song but I left early cuz ppl there were not my type So since I bieve is Indian I dedicate this to you and your country

 

[GUNS-N- ROSES]

Oooo jub say dil haara oh budla ma saara ka saara umm sumthing like that i heard in a party not a sher but a song but I left early cuz ppl there were not my type So since I bieve is Indian I dedicate this to you and your country

mutee bhai lets not degrade ourselves by calling u r country and my country. india and pak are one and the same. we share the same cultures/languages/food (even abuses lol). insha allah things will be all right in future.

 

[Mutee]

mutee bhai lets not degrade ourselves by calling u r country and my country. india and pak are one and the same. we share the same cultures/languages/food (even abuses lol). insha allah things will be all right in future.

Wow! Yes indeed if we have ppl like you on both sides things will be alright I would say great actually but we need more ppl like you !!!!!!!

 

[raahi]

Ek apni likhi nazm, mai bhi share karna chahtaa huN, kabhi likhi thi, kisi ke liye.......... usi ke diye naam se

sarhad paar se aane wale bataa
dyar-e-yar se aane wale bataa

kaisa hai mera mahboob vatan
bahaaN ke gul-khar-o-chaman
sarhad paar se aane wale bataa

baha ki sari maayeN kaisi hai
maaoN ke bete kaise hai
kya maa ki rasoi mahakti hai
kya betoN ki jeb mai paise hai
kya bahnoN ki hatheli hinayee hai
kab unki rasme-e-sagayee hai
kitne surmayee hai khaab unke
kitne khabeeda hai unke nayan
kaisa hai mera mahboob vatan

sarhad paar se aane wale bataa.
suna hai waha ka hakim zalim hai
fir uski riyasat kaisi hai
galiyon -sadko ki raftaar hai kya
chand suraj ki rifakat kaisi hai
har ghar ki aukaat hai kya
deewar-o-dar ki banavat kaisi hai
sarhad paar se aane wale bataa……

jo ye nahi to ye bataa
meri guddu meri mohabbat kaisi hai
bat bat pe roti hasti thi
uski ye adat kaisi hai
woqt-e-rukhsat tha bukhaar use
ab uski tabiyat kaisi hai
jiske liye mujhe chHoda usne
uski haisiyat kaisi hai
kitna rutba hai uska wahaN
kitna hai uski batoN meiN wajan
sarhad paar se aane wale bataa

kahti thi hoke beabaak mujhe
hai jaan se pyara Paak mujhe
ispe na aaNch aane dungi
chahe kar de koe halaaQ mujhe
sone jaisi lagti hai
iski mitti,iski khaak mujhe

Sarhad paar se ane wale sun…
khush rahe mera mahboob..
mera mahboob vatan
hasti rahe woh basti rahe
kare tarakkee khoob vatan

mera mahboob vatan………..​

 

[Mutee]

Very good keep em coming

 

[Mutee]

unhi Khut may likha Kay dil muztrib hai jawab unnka aya mohabut na kurtay tumhi dil laganay ko kiss nay kaha tha ? Baahel jayi ka dil beheltay beheltay (qamar jalalwi)

 

[GUNS-N- ROSES]

yeh muskurahat jo mere chehre pe chhayi hai,

aur kuch nahi, yeh to teri jhalak ki yaadein hai

jo mere dil main samaayi hai

 

[Mutee]

Way wah thanks sir

 

[Mutee]

App gabriyeah na joor(zulm) say tooba na kerin app Kay sir ki qasam Dagh ka haal acha hai (mirza dagh delhvi)

 

[pak-marine]

this one is on i-pak semis ~ Sarcasm intended!

YuN PaKiStaN sE DuShMaNi AcHi NaHi InDiA
SheElA TerE JaWaN HaI
MuNi TeRe BadNaAm Hai
MaAt BhOl DhOnI
CaPtAin HuMaRa AkHiR PaThAn Hai