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Sometimes some poems are really beautiful sooooooo pretty that u so wanna share but then poem kay beech may kaheen na kaheen shayar writes a chawal thing and then i cant post.

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Poem nahin, Ghazal hey bibi. Hamari umar ko pohncho gi tou yahi acha laga karey ga. Zindagi bohat talkh hey, bohat.
Ji maloom hai ghazal hai uska english may koi word nahi hota? Iwas thinking. So wrote poem.hehe embarrassing. Talkh , yup, magar log bohat jhootay hotay hain , there is no room for ppl who sincerely attach themselves with others.
 
@HRK Bhai, check it out, how beautiful couplet is this - pay attention to the second stanza... Nakhl-e-tamanna!

ضعف پیری بڑھ گیا جوش جوانی گھٹ گیا
اب عصا بنوایے نخل تمنا کاٹ کر
 
Hamesha dair kar deta hoon main
Har kaam karnay mein

Zaroori baat kehne ho
Koi wada nibhana ho
Usay aawaz deni ho
Usay wapis bulana ho
Hamesha dair kar deta hoon main

Madad karni ho us ki
Yaar ke dhaarus bundhana ho
Bohat dayreena rustoon par
Kisi se milne jana ho
Hamesha dair kar deta hoon main

Budaltay mausmo ke sair mein
Dil ko lagana ho
Kisi ko yaad rakhna ho
Kisi ko bhool jana ho
Hamesha dair kar deta hoon main

Kisi ko maut se pehlay
Kisi ghum se buchana ho
Haqeeqat aur thi kuch us ko
Jaa kay yah batana ho

Hamesha dair kar deta hoon main
Har kaam karnay mein

(Poet: Munir Niazi)

@levina @halupridol
 
Hamesha dair kar deta hoon main
Har kaam karnay mein

Zaroori baat kehne ho
Koi wada nibhana ho
Usay aawaz deni ho
Usay wapis bulana ho
Hamesha dair kar deta hoon main

Madad karni ho us ki
Yaar ke dhaarus bundhana ho
Bohat dayreena rustoon par
Kisi se milne jana ho
Hamesha dair kar deta hoon main

Budaltay mausmo ke sair mein
Dil ko lagana ho
Kisi ko yaad rakhna ho
Kisi ko bhool jana ho
Hamesha dair kar deta hoon main

Kisi ko maut se pehlay
Kisi ghum se buchana ho
Haqeeqat aur thi kuch us ko
Jaa kay yah batana ho

Hamesha dair kar deta hoon main
Har kaam karnay mein

(Poet: Munir Niazi)

@levina @halupridol
beautiful...something that stirs up one's emotions. :tup:
 
غزل
مل ہی جائے گا کبھی، دل کو یقیں رہتا ہے
وہ اسی شہر کی گلیوں میں کہیں رہتا ہے

جس کی سانسوں سے مہکتے تھے در و بام ترے
اے مکاں بول، کہاں اب وہ مکیں رہتا ہے

اِک زمانہ تھا کہ سب ایک جگہ رہتے تھے
اور اب کوئی کہیں کوئی کہیں رہتا ہے

روز ملنے پہ بھی لگتا تھا کہ جُگ بیت گئے
عشق میں وقت کا احساس نہیں رہتا ہے

دل فسردہ تو ہوا دیکھ کے اس کو لیکن
عمر بھر کون جواں، کون حسیں رہتا ہے
احمد مشتاق
 
@HRK Bhai, check it out, how beautiful couplet is this - pay attention to the second stanza... Nakhl-e-tamanna!

ضعف پیری بڑھ گیا جوش جوانی گھٹ گیا
اب عصا بنوایے نخل تمنا کاٹ کر
COULD U BELIEVE MEE!!!!

may nay yeh shair do teen chaar dafa parha cuz i kept reading عصا as عضا

Aur mujhay samajh nahi arahi thee woh aazaa keu banwaey ga . Then suddenly i norticed its a'sa.what is nakhl e tamana, nakhl tau khajoor ko kehtay hain
 
COULD U BELIEVE MEE!!!!

may nay yeh shair do teen chaar dafa parha cuz i kept reading عصا as عضا

Aur mujhay samajh nahi arahi thee woh aazaa keu banwaey ga . Then suddenly i norticed its a'sa.what is nakhl e tamana, nakhl tau khajoor ko kehtay hain
Nakhal means wood from a tree. Poet is saying that now time has come to carve out a walking stick from the wood of wishes. We grow old but not our wishes and desires but we cant do much due to physical weakness. So poet is referring those unachievable wishes as wood, something dead, and suggesting to use dead wishes to make a walking stick to be used in the old age.
 
Nakhal means wood from a tree. Poet is saying that now time has come to carve out a walking stick from the wood of wishes. We grow old but not our wishes and desires but we cant do much due to physical weakness. So poet is referring those unachievable wishes as wood, something dead, and suggesting to use dead wishes to make a walking stick to be used in the old age.
Oh thanks a lot for so much detailed explanation. Intelligent ista'aray use kiey hain. Wow nakhl e tamanna.

Acha yeh dekhain
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