Rafael
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Aap pehlay kuch acha sa gaana yahan par post karein... the rest can take the cue
aelo janab!!!
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Aap pehlay kuch acha sa gaana yahan par post karein... the rest can take the cue
I hate you for this
raheel edit your post...mai tumhen bohat maroon gi...
@ Enigma: share more of your poetry
'My' poetry? i dont 'poet'
Rather i dont like it, hazam nahi hoti. Just a few old thoughts bringing back the days of Siachen....Kuch ti hawa be sard the....kuch tha tera khyal bhi...-aye hai....wah ji ShakirA Baji!!
BTW, which poetry? the leechar brand or the formal one?
Aaah, so you weren't always all brawns!!! How many decades back were you like this
Which brand do you wish to dispense of today Mr. Enigmatic, the choice is yours! (you have to post some in the next thread )
You forgot to add a couple old guy!A few decades only, though i still remeber it-a few of it rather:
(correct me where i went wrong)
Khuch tu hawa bhi sard the kuch tha tera khayal bhi
Dil ko khushi k sath sath, hota raha malal bhi
Baat wo adhi raat ki, raat wo poray chaand ki
Cahnd bhi aain chait ka, us per tera jamal bhi
Sub say nazar bacha ko wo, mujh ko kuch aisay daikhta
Ik dafa tu rok gayee gardishay maho saal bhi
Us ko na pa sakay thay jab, dil ka ajab hall tha
Ab jo mor k daikheeyie, baat bhi thi kuch mohaal bhi
You forgot to add a couple old guy!
Miss, i said i was COUPLE of 'those' old, as regards to my age.
This time it was FEW as i didnt climb Siachen the day i was born!