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[The Eagle]

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Adab Ki Baat Hai Warna Munir Socho To
Jo Shakhs Sunta Hai Wo Bol Bhi To Sakta Hai...



Munir Niazi my most favorite poet.

Ummmm... Good 1... So how about this....

Ham tu thehray wo sayah-kar naseeb Tariq
Jo kholi dukan-e-kafan, logo ne marna chorh dia....


Hopefully not missing words here.

 

[Moonlight]

Ummmm... Good 1... So how about this....

Ham tu thehray wo sayah-kar naseeb Tariq
Jo kholi dukan-e-kafan, logo ne marna chorh dia....


Hopefully not missing words here.

Tariq Aziz right?




Mana K Jurm Mene Kiya Tha Magar
Di Tu Ne Darust Saza Nahi

Sagir Sadiquie

Another favorite poet

 

[The Eagle]

Tariq Aziz right?




Mana K Jurm Mene Kiya Tha Magar
Di Tu Ne Darust Saza Nahi

Sagir Sadiquie

Another favorite poet

Sagir ... Never read it..... I think there should be a word in second line like.....

Mana K Jurm Mene Kiya Tha Magar
Di Tu Ne Bhi Darust Saza Nahi

Just saying hahahahaha.....

However, a girlish but I like it....

Es shart pe khelu gi piya piyar ki baazi
Jeeto tu tuje pa'ao, haaru'n tu ma Teri

 

[Moonlight]

Sagir ... Never read it..... I think there should be a word in second line like.....

Mana K Jurm Mene Kiya Tha Magar
Di Tu Ne Bhi Darust Saza Nahi

Just saying hahahahaha.....

However, a girlish but I like it....

Es shart pe khelu gi piya piyar ki baazi
Jeeto tu tuje pa'ao, haaru'n tu ma Teri

HAHHA yes girlish but I don't really like it. Parveen Shakir ka hai shyad.




Kabhi Masjid, Kabhi Mandir Main Ghoomta Raha Rat Bhar
Kabhi Musalman, Kabhi Hindu Banaya Kisi Ne

Yeh bhi Saghar (some spell it this way) ka hai.

 

[The Eagle]

HAHHA yes girlish but I don't really like it. Parveen Shakir ka hai shyad.




Kabhi Masjid, Kabhi Mandir Main Ghoomta Raha Rat Bhar
Kabhi Musalman, Kabhi Hindu Banaya Kisi Ne

Yeh bhi Saghar (some spell it this way) ka hai.

Yeah that seems like Parveen's.

However, my friend once said it..... Don't know the poet....

Pehle us ne Mus kaha, phir Tak kaha, phir Bil kaha,

Kis tarha us zalim ne mustakbil k tukray kar diye .....

 

[Moonlight]

Yeah that seems like Parveen's.

However, my friend once said it..... Don't know the poet....

Pehle us ne Mus kaha, phir Tak kaha, phir Bil kaha,

Kis tarha us zalim ne mustakbil k tukray kar diye .....

Good one good one.





Ta'aluq Hai Mera Jis Qaum Se Us Qaum Ki Bachi
Khareedy Jab Koi Guriya Dupatta Sath Leti Hai...

 

[The Eagle]

Good one good one.





Ta'aluq Hai Mera Jis Qaum Se Us Qaum Ki Bachi
Khareedy Jab Koi Guriya Dupatta Sath Leti Hai...

Wah. Wah..... though I can't recall in this category.... ATM

But,....

Wo mere pas se guzar gaye, Mera hal tak na pocha.....

Ma ye kese maan jaou k wo duor ja kar roye..

 

[Moonlight]

Wo mere pas se guzar gaye, Mera hal tak na pocha.....

Ma ye kese maan jaou k wo duor ja kar roye..

This is one of my favorite.




Barbadiyon Ka Jaiza Lene K Wasty
Wo Puchte Hain Haal Bhi Mera Kabhi Kabhi...

 

[The Eagle]

This is one of my favorite.




Barbadiyon Ka Jaiza Lene K Wasty
Wo Puchte Hain Haal Bhi Mera Kabhi Kabhi...

Aawla .... Good.... Good....

 

[Moonlight]

Aawla .... Good.... Good....

Lost? I win the 'bait Bazi'?


Aik Hi Apna Milne Wala Tha
Aisa Bichra K Phir Mila Hi Nahi...

Jon Elia

 

[The Eagle]

Un k dekhay se Jo a jati ha mouh par ronaq..
Wo Samajtay hain k beemar ka haal acha ha...

Using cell phone and feeling sleepy.... Wese b .... I am not good in poetry that much.....

 

[Moonlight]

Un k dekhay se Jo a jati ha mouh par ronaq..
Wo Samajtay hain k beemar ka haal acha ha...

Mirza Ghalib.



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Chalo phir main bhi Ghalib ka he share Karty



main bhi muh me zubaan rakhataa hun
kaash puchho ki mudd'a kyaa hai

Un k dekhay se Jo a jati ha mouh par ronaq..
Wo Samajtay hain k beemar ka haal acha ha...

Using cell phone and feeling sleepy.... Wese b .... I am not good in poetry that much.....

Oh okay. Shabha Khair.

 

[The Eagle]

main bhi muh me zubaan rakhataa hun
kaash puchho ki mudd'a kyaa hai

Ishq tha, koi karobar tu ma thaa
Phir nuksan huwa tu huwa kese

 

[Moonlight]

Ishq tha, koi karobar tu ma thaa
Phir nuksan huwa tu huwa kese

Wah wah wah. Loved it.



Kia zaroori he ke hum haar ke jeetain taabish

Ishq ka khel barabar bhi tou ho sakta he

 

[The Eagle]

Wah wah wah. Loved it.



Kia zaroori he ke hum haar ke jeetain taabish

Ishq ka khel barabar bhi tou ho sakta he

Irshad irshad.... Khayal rakhain paros se Irshad bhai na ith kar a jain.... Lol

However, last one.....

Gulab dain ge, Gulab lain ge...
Muhabato'n ma khasara nahi Chalay ga.

Shab bakhair ji.... Frankly speaking, bohat mushkil se complete kiya ha..... And ammunition b khatam hu raha ... Hahahah...