Need opinion & possible support on my YouTube

[TheSnakeEatingMarkhur]

Hi, I have created a YouTube channel and I just wanted fellow PDF users' opinion on the initial intro.

I stopped using social media few months ago as it was a time waste, I only use YT and visit PDF so I thought of using YT to contribute whatever I can in Pakistan's Narative building...

Here is the intro:

I purposely gave it old VCH look... thoight it'll look good...

@Trailer23 @Sunny4pak

I am off to bed now lads.. nearly morning here..

 

[TheSnakeEatingMarkhur]

Hi, I have created a YouTube channel and I just wanted fellow PDF users' opinion on the initial intro.

I stopped using social media few months ago as it was a time waste, I only use YT and visit PDF so I thought of using YT to contribute whatever I can in Pakistan's Narative building...

Here is the intro:

I purposely gave it old VCH look... thoight it'll look good...

@Trailer23 @Sunny4pak

I am off to bed now lads.. nearly morning here..

@Sunny4pak and @Trailer23 What do you think

 

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Logo ko blink khatm kro yr
Constant Toooon toooon is not pleasant

 

[PakistaniAtBahrain]

maybe instead of the beep beep and flashing, you could make the logo fade in.

 

[TheSnakeEatingMarkhur]

Logo ko blink khatm kro yr
Constant Toooon toooon is not pleasant

Bro ita Morse Code which decodes to Pakistan Zindabad

maybe instead of the beep beep and flashing, you could make the logo fade in.

Thanks but there is a reason behind that beep and flashing..

 

[User]

Hi, I have created a YouTube channel and I just wanted fellow PDF users' opinion on the initial intro.

I stopped using social media few months ago as it was a time waste, I only use YT and visit PDF so I thought of using YT to contribute whatever I can in Pakistan's Narative building...

Here is the intro:

I purposely gave it old VCH look... thoight it'll look good...

@Trailer23 @Sunny4pak

I am off to bed now lads.. nearly morning here..

I think the music doesn`t go with the logo and the beep.
Perhaps try some mystery music. But either put it before the beep or after it finishes.
Or my favourite: put some sound of military radio and then add the morse code.

Check this video and choose something you may like:

 

[Dual Wielder]

I think the intro is probably a bit too long, maybe You can switch to something like that as an outro instead.. In my honest opinion I feel You should be focusing more on the content, as You can always fine tune the intro later as Your channel progresses.. for now something basic and short should suffice.

 

[Trailer23]

Bro ita Morse Code which decodes to Pakistan Zindabad

Thanks but there is a reason behind that beep and flashing..

@Sunny4pak and @Trailer23 What do you think

How many people do you think read, let alone understand Morse Code? I get it..., its an interesting approach but the intro itself is too long.

a. 14seconds. I could boil an egg in that period. Movie Teasers are shorter during the Super Bowl.
- For intros, get some ideas from Lockheed Martin, MBDA, General Dynamics, Boeing etc. You could also try checking out Professional Sports pages. NBA, NFL, MLB all have classy ideas because they invest a lot and are great source for ideas.
- Let me be frank, honest and direct because you asked for my opinion and because I want you to succeed in your endeavor and hopefully be as successful as @Sunny4pak . At the moment i'd grade the intro: 3/10

You gotta be atleast: 6/10

b. The Green background has gotta go. The pattern seems a bit loud. The Markhoor seems to get hidden and the snake appears to look more like a 'stache of Abhinandan.

If you have material ready to go online, hold on to it. Don't rush. Work on the intro until it is refined.

I say this from the replies you've had so far. No one is gonna sit & watch the 14sec intro each time you unleash a new video. They'll just scroll FWD to the good part.

If I wanna listen to the Anthem, i'll just...

 

[TheSnakeEatingMarkhur]

The snake appears to look more like a 'stache of Abhinandan.

Thanks a lot bahi will refine it..

Logo ko blink khatm kro yr
Constant Toooon toooon is not pleasant

maybe instead of the beep beep and flashing, you could make the logo fade in.

I think the music doesn`t go with the logo and the beep.
Perhaps try some mystery music. But either put it before the beep or after it finishes.
Or my favourite: put some sound of military radio and then add the morse code.

Check this video and choose something you may like:

I think the intro is probably a bit too long, maybe You can switch to something like that as an outro instead.. In my honest opinion I feel You should be focusing more on the content, as You can always fine tune the intro later as Your channel progresses.. for now something basic and short should suffice.

How many people do you think read, let alone understand Morse Code? I get it..., its an interesting approach but the intro itself is too long.

a. 14seconds. I could boil an egg in that period. Movie Teasers are shorter during the Super Bowl.
- For intros, get some ideas from Lockheed Martin, MBDA, General Dynamics, Boeing etc. You could also try checking out Professional Sports pages. NBA, NFL, MLB all have classy ideas because they invest a lot and are great source for ideas.
- Let me be frank, honest and direct because you asked for my opinion and because I want you to succeed in your endeavor and hopefully be as successful as @Sunny4pak . At the moment i'd grade the intro: 3/10

You gotta be atleast: 6/10

b. The Green background has gotta go. The pattern seems a bit loud. The Markhoor seems to get hidden and the snake appears to look more like a 'stache of Abhinandan.

If you have material ready to go online, hold on to it. Don't rush. Work on the intro until it is refined.

I say this from the replies you've had so far. No one is gonna sit & watch the 14sec intro each time you unleash a new video. They'll just scroll FWD to the good part.

If I wanna listen to the Anthem, i'll just...

Thank you everyone for your replies... helped a lot.. will work on it.. make it better and then post it again

 

[Sunny4pak]

Hi, I have created a YouTube channel and I just wanted fellow PDF users' opinion on the initial intro.

I stopped using social media few months ago as it was a time waste, I only use YT and visit PDF so I thought of using YT to contribute whatever I can in Pakistan's Narative building...

Here is the intro:

I purposely gave it old VCH look... thoight it'll look good...

@Trailer23 @Sunny4pak

I am off to bed now lads.. nearly morning here..

Sorry for late reply, I was bit busy would be good for you to read Vasef feedback, he covered almost all the points i might have asked. Furthermore do contact me in person I have some other ideas that are difficult to mention here regarding support on youtube from my side. Vasef is far ahead i do learn from his editing skills, but he is underrated on YT.

 

[TheSnakeEatingMarkhur]

Sorry for late reply, I was bit busy would be good for you to read Vasef feedback, he covered almost all the points i might have asked. Furthermore do contact me in person I have some other ideas that are difficult to mention here regarding support on youtube from my side. Vasef is far ahead i do learn from his editing skills, but he is underrated on YT.

How do I contact you in person bahi ?

 

[TheSnakeEatingMarkhur]

Logo ko blink khatm kro yr
Constant Toooon toooon is not pleasant

maybe instead of the beep beep and flashing, you could make the logo fade in.

I think the music doesn`t go with the logo and the beep.
Perhaps try some mystery music. But either put it before the beep or after it finishes.
Or my favourite: put some sound of military radio and then add the morse code.

Check this video and choose something you may like:

I think the intro is probably a bit too long, maybe You can switch to something like that as an outro instead.. In my honest opinion I feel You should be focusing more on the content, as You can always fine tune the intro later as Your channel progresses.. for now something basic and short should suffice.

How many people do you think read, let alone understand Morse Code? I get it..., its an interesting approach but the intro itself is too long.

a. 14seconds. I could boil an egg in that period. Movie Teasers are shorter during the Super Bowl.
- For intros, get some ideas from Lockheed Martin, MBDA, General Dynamics, Boeing etc. You could also try checking out Professional Sports pages. NBA, NFL, MLB all have classy ideas because they invest a lot and are great source for ideas.
- Let me be frank, honest and direct because you asked for my opinion and because I want you to succeed in your endeavor and hopefully be as successful as @Sunny4pak . At the moment i'd grade the intro: 3/10

You gotta be atleast: 6/10

b. The Green background has gotta go. The pattern seems a bit loud. The Markhoor seems to get hidden and the snake appears to look more like a 'stache of Abhinandan.

If you have material ready to go online, hold on to it. Don't rush. Work on the intro until it is refined.

I say this from the replies you've had so far. No one is gonna sit & watch the 14sec intro each time you unleash a new video. They'll just scroll FWD to the good part.

If I wanna listen to the Anthem, i'll just...

Sorry for late reply, I was bit busy would be good for you to read Vasef feedback, he covered almost all the points i might have asked. Furthermore do contact me in person I have some other ideas that are difficult to mention here regarding support on youtube from my side. Vasef is far ahead i do learn from his editing skills, but he is underrated on YT.

How does this look ?

 

[PakistaniAtBahrain]

How does this look ?

i am fine with it. some people cant tolerate the flashing though on medical grounds.

 

[TheSnakeEatingMarkhur]

i am fine with it. some people cant tolerate the flashing though on medical grounds.

Oh didnt know it had medical implications... I turned the volume down so I dont think beeps are a problem anymore...

 

[Dual Wielder]

How does this look ?

Much better compared to the first one, I see You have reduced it by more than 50% which is good, me personally would probably forgo anything longer than 5 seconds, but thats just me as I am accustomed to skip them most of the time. Also all those military logos kind of makes it a bit too amateurish and they overpopulate the screen You could add them as an outro instead.. I do like the typing animation/effect though.