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  • Yeah man, they just cannot bear truth if it goes against them. Mosamania, blackeagle, Cem_ all of them are like that. -_-

    And this Raykalm considers every posts which goes against saudi arabia as insult :woot:
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    Chatting language is a thing and a decent and high quality language is an another thing. My paragraph here is full of spelling mistakes not "errors", that's because it was chatting. Anyway, I hope that Aryan-B has got the lesson that he must not even mention others weak English in this forum. If I ever see anything like that, I will correct his writing errors in front of all members. It's unfortunate that some people learn things in the hard way.

    I hope I don't see posts like this one from now and then:


    "You cant understand frakkin English? check the previous three or four posts. I said earlier that you cant rely on vids etc."
    http://www.defence.pk/forums/members/ottoman-turk.html

    Look at the post of "BLACKEAGLE" in his profile. No wonder the British were successful in dividing us!

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    do you know why we kicked turkey out and beat the crap out of it?
    because you were losers and brought the whole ummah down, you were nothing but ashame. And look at yourself swapping cars in England. why don't come to Jordan to clean streets instead?

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    4- "So I take this to mean we live in interesting times":
    A- The adverb "so" should be followed by a comma. And again, you forgot the capital letter of "I".
    B- "to mean": You can't use the word "mean" as an "infinitive" here. You can rather say "to point out" followed by the connector "that" .
    C- It's a sentence with two clauses, yet, you can't omit the connector which keeps them together in one sentence. You can omit a connector in some cases but not when the connector refers to the subject as in this sentence.

    * I would be glad for help at any time, my friend.
    2- Dependent clause: "I think", here you can't put this clause without a connector (Co-ordinating, sub-ordinating, or co-relative conjunctions, as well as, relative pronouns or adverbs ) or at least a comma.

    2- "I have come across an interesting article that I would like to share with you": This affirmative and complex sentence is correct, but you should have used the adverb "just" before the main verb "come".
    Just= a short time ago.
    3- "basically it says that we live in interesting times and may expect changes in the future it also points to the delicate position that turkey is in"
    A- You started your sentence here with the adverb "basically" which should be started with a capital letter and followed by a comma.
    B- "it also points to the delicate position that turkey is in": It's a completely new sentence.
    My friend, I am willing to help you improve your English:
    Guys can we discuss this rationally. I have come across an interesting article that I would like to share with you. It is an old article but relevant I think. basically it says that we live in interesting times and may expect changes in the future it also points to the delicate position that turkey is in :
    So I take this to mean we live in interesting times

    1- "Guys can we discuss this rationally":
    A: (guys) should be followed by a comma.
    B- ( can we) here, you started your sentence with an auxiliary verb (modal verb) followed by a subject (we), yet, its an interrogative sentence which must be ended with an exclamation mark (?).
    C- It is an old article but relevant I think: here you used three clauses:
    1- Two Independent clauses: "It's old article" the first one connected using a co-ordinating conjunction (but) with the other clause "relevant"= "It's a relevant article".
    Butt Sahib, whats with the Saudi/Wahabi dislike ? Why such a pronounced hate for them ? Its certainly not that Iranian Cultural Centres in Pakistan aren't exporting their Revolutions either !
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