Wrote Punjabi Poetry Need Your Suggestion

[Darth Vader]

As its My First Every Piece I wrote in Punjabi and em Pretty Sure i screwed Up really bad
Its Against No man As i see in Current Pakistan People Forget they are Pakistani or Muslims and care more about there Preachers Molvies Say so its About That So if some one take it personal em sorry about that as i said earlier em not trying to offend any one

Pira Pira ki Kardya bandiya KI Duniya pira Banai .

Jith Nazar pendi othe e Malang de masti Chai

Insan nu insan samajna nhi magar Hukam pir de insaniyat mukai

Lok Smaj jo khande(Sugar) Khand O Hak(Dirt) e ona de Moo which ai

Bal Bal Dive(lantern) ve ma Duniya which sab Andher(Darkness) Pai

Vech ke izat me ja darbar te Dhamal(Dance) kalya e pai

Je tu yaken rakhya na peer fer tu kufr di Diti Guvai

Malik(Lord , God) Poche Bande Ve Bandiya Kis Kis Cheez diti nhi Meri Guvai(Proof of existence)

Tu Chad ke Sach(Truth) nu Kyun aag di Bandegi(Worship) Lai


Its a Small Piece Any advice and Do Forgive my Wording mistakes because em not familiar with urdu words

 

[LaaL]

you should learn Sha Mukhi font (resembles URDU font) first because roman Punjabi can't create the effect.

 

[Darth Vader]

you should learn Sha Mukhi font (resembles URDU font) first because roman Punjabi can't create the effect.

Whats That ?

 

[LaaL]

Whats That ?

Punjabi writing font I can't post links so please google it.

Punjabi poetry written in Sha Mukhi font

 

[Darth Vader]

Punjabi writing font I can't post links so please google it.

I did but Sorry em Not Able to write that , and if i use Google Translator it just gone mess it up

 

[LaaL]

I did but Sorry em Not Able to write that , and if i use Google Translator it just gone mess it up

Yes google translator wont help You need to learn Urdu writing and then Punjabi writing font sha mukhi check the image i posted.

 

[Mentee]

kaa'n udea ay par chand k
m ay v din vaikhnay ayy

tusa'n langna c kandd kr k
m ay v din vaikhnay ayy