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As Earlier i wrote my 1st Piece Operation Dark Target its the 2nd Piece From a Different Story ,as i like to write
If any mistakes occur tell me or you have any suggestion please do tell me Thanks
Its fiction all of its just imaginary ,
Special Squad
Spy Fiction
There Will Be Some part which could be Too strong or Show a bad image of Soldiers involved in the story but it’s all fiction.
Whoop Whop of Huey Woke me up. I Could See the Small Lights Twinkling on the Ground
Like Small Glow Warms fighting with darkness in the Middle of to spread their light in nothingness.
“Wake Up Captain” I heard Assad’s Loud Voice in my Comms,
I opened my eyes and passed a Judgmental Look to Him. We were in Afg ,Close to Afg Pak Border Where People where Still living in 17 Century.
A Classified Village.
“And Here I am fighting with some mercenary Who was Fighting for no Sane reason, who Would happily blow himself and others Up because some fat Mullah Promised him that he Will Go to Heaven.”
My Mind was going insane I was in charge of this assault Squad.
6 Specially Trained SSG chosen for One and only Reason “Become the Terror for Terrorist”,
Years of Fighting made them Weak and Armies Progress in Fata and NW area made them move their Command to Afg where They could easily Operate against Pakistan.
Now I Could see Lights Getting Close.
“Get Ready Boys we are Getting Close to LZ”. I said in comms.
Intel Informed Higher Ups That HVT (High Value Target) was at Location. We were there for One and only Reasons to Grab the HVT and teach his Comrades a lesson in their own language. Now they are not safe anywhere. Mountains of Afghanistan Won’t be there shelter anymore.
My Team Included 6 Persons in it
1 Assad, SSG Commando specialist in Hand 2 Hand Combat and Really Good with People.
2 Omer, SSG Commando Specialist in Assault, and Our Local Guide
3 Khalid, SSG Commando Specialist in assault, and in hand 2 hand Combat
4 Jamshed or Jad as everyone called him was Our Tech Nerdy Soldier. Our Intel and Comms Guy. “Yes You heard me Right a Nerdy Soldier in Pakistan Army Fighting Against People Who still lived there lives according to 10000 Bc Rules. most modern thing in their life was probably a AK 47”.
5 Khuram, SSG commando, And Our Beloved Marksman and we Called “Snippy”
6 And Me Misbah “Not the Cricketer” I was The Captain of this Shit Show.
2 AM Our Bird Dropped us At LZ Which was a rugged hill, Close to The Targets Location but it wasn’t that close so Talis Could hear our bird and see us dropping.
Our Mission was about to Start and So it was time for the pep Talk
Listen Boys! As Center have already briefed you about it, Target is High Ranking Commander in TTP and target is Close to inner circle of Mullah Radio (Fazlullah or Radio Mullah) Our Job is to grab him no matter what’s the cost. Is that Clear.
“Yes. Sir” they Shouted and we started moving on long with narrow Curves of this beautiful Hill.
What a Romantic Night it was, Moon at its Fullest Shining and guiding us, After Walking 1 Click I could see the Lights at Target Compound, and we could hear the Generators Noise.
“Comms and Flirs sights up Boys”, I said.
Me! “Khuram Take your position and Take out All the Lights and Outer Ring Guards” we will start in 5 Mintures.
“Rest Scan the Area”.
After 5 Minutes , I heard Khuram Saying “At Position. Targets in Sight, Taking Out 1st Target in
3…
2….
1….
Target Down, and we Saw One of the Tali on the Roof Go down, and Khuram Started to take out Remaining Targets 1 by 1
“Outside of Compound Secure No Living Targets Close to The Compound” He said.
Move in Guys, as We got inside the compound and started to sweep the Area, to check if there was any Target Hiding inside but we weren’t able to find anyone all was clear. Now it was time to Sweep inside of the Two storey building,
“Assad Open the Door, Jad and Khalid You Guys Sweep the 2nd Floor, if You See Anyone Send them to Hell Unless it’s the Target and Leave Some Signs so it will be clear for villager’s that some other Group attacked This Compound”. I said and We moved in the first Floor,1st Room Was full with Smoke of Opium , I could See 4 Guys Lying on the Floor with one Girl whose Body was Lying on the naked on floor with Marks and blood on her Body, I could See Blood in Assad’s Eyes, and see his Bayonet
But i Nodded No with head and singled him to follow me, there was similar story in 2nd Room and now 3rd was the last room remaining as we were about to Go in I heard Jads Voice in My Comms
“We Found the Target But There are 2 Young’s Girls in his room and but there are 2 men in other rooms and girls are not in good condition what are the orders Cap ?”.
Grab the Girls and HVT out of The Room and Only Takeout Those with Silence who are any state to wake up for the Rest of them let them sleep I have a Surprise for them. I checked the 3rd Door a guy was Sleeping with Laptop On and I could see Booze Bottle Sitting There, I took out the Laptop and came back to 2nd Room to see Assad’s Knife Full of Blood, and Talis Gutted in Blood I singled him to take out the Girls and as I was about to Pick up one of the girl she opened her eyes and Saw Fear in eyes I Put My hand on hear mouth and said ssshhh to her and she wasn’t able to Say anything her eyes filled with fear.
When we came out to the main hall, and saw 2 Girl and 1 Fat Mullah, gagged and tied up on the Floor.
I could see the same expression on Jads and Khalids Faces We Put All the girls on one side and I asked Khalid to Find something, so we could torch this place with these Bastards inside.
“What? Are you Serious, and who are these girls?” I heard Khurams Voice in My comms.
“Khalid Do it”. I said Instead of replying to Khuram. Khalid Turned and went to only shed where we saw the generator and fuel canisters earlier, While Khurram was continuously screaming in my Ear.
Jad Tell the Center we have HVT Secured and asked them to send a medic Helo too we need to move these girls to hospital.
Khalid and Jad went to the Second Floor and Started Spreading Oil on the Floor and Khalid and I Did the Same thing on the Ground Floor and locked all the doors from outside.
After Doing that we came back to Floor and Asad lig The Match Stick and The Oil Caught Fire and we could see the fire Running inside the Compound to turn everything into asshes.
We Got in Cover and Our Gun Sights Pointed Towards the Door if some Tali Tried to Run outside we could take them.
Suddenly The Silence was Broken by the Screaming of Talis, they were banging on the doors screaming Whole Compound was in Fire and Ammo cache inside the Building Caught Fire Loud Blasts started to wake up the whole Valley, we see villagers running towards the compound it was Our Que to Run for The LZ. Noises Also woke up two Girls we asked them if they can move 3 where still unconscious. Khalid jad and Asad picked the 3 girls and we started to Running towards LZ. I was supporting two girls were able to move properly.
Story Continues …
Any suggestions ?
@TankMan @Slav Defence @Akheilos @Bratva @Jf Thunder @ranjeet @Selous @Koovie @American Pakistani
@Zarvan@Doordie @Pakistani Exile @Devil Soul @Pakistanisage @I S I @Spring Onion @Super Falcon
If any mistakes occur tell me or you have any suggestion please do tell me Thanks
Its fiction all of its just imaginary ,
Special Squad
Spy Fiction
There Will Be Some part which could be Too strong or Show a bad image of Soldiers involved in the story but it’s all fiction.
Whoop Whop of Huey Woke me up. I Could See the Small Lights Twinkling on the Ground
Like Small Glow Warms fighting with darkness in the Middle of to spread their light in nothingness.
“Wake Up Captain” I heard Assad’s Loud Voice in my Comms,
I opened my eyes and passed a Judgmental Look to Him. We were in Afg ,Close to Afg Pak Border Where People where Still living in 17 Century.
A Classified Village.
“And Here I am fighting with some mercenary Who was Fighting for no Sane reason, who Would happily blow himself and others Up because some fat Mullah Promised him that he Will Go to Heaven.”
My Mind was going insane I was in charge of this assault Squad.
6 Specially Trained SSG chosen for One and only Reason “Become the Terror for Terrorist”,
Years of Fighting made them Weak and Armies Progress in Fata and NW area made them move their Command to Afg where They could easily Operate against Pakistan.
Now I Could see Lights Getting Close.
“Get Ready Boys we are Getting Close to LZ”. I said in comms.
Intel Informed Higher Ups That HVT (High Value Target) was at Location. We were there for One and only Reasons to Grab the HVT and teach his Comrades a lesson in their own language. Now they are not safe anywhere. Mountains of Afghanistan Won’t be there shelter anymore.
My Team Included 6 Persons in it
1 Assad, SSG Commando specialist in Hand 2 Hand Combat and Really Good with People.
2 Omer, SSG Commando Specialist in Assault, and Our Local Guide
3 Khalid, SSG Commando Specialist in assault, and in hand 2 hand Combat
4 Jamshed or Jad as everyone called him was Our Tech Nerdy Soldier. Our Intel and Comms Guy. “Yes You heard me Right a Nerdy Soldier in Pakistan Army Fighting Against People Who still lived there lives according to 10000 Bc Rules. most modern thing in their life was probably a AK 47”.
5 Khuram, SSG commando, And Our Beloved Marksman and we Called “Snippy”
6 And Me Misbah “Not the Cricketer” I was The Captain of this Shit Show.
2 AM Our Bird Dropped us At LZ Which was a rugged hill, Close to The Targets Location but it wasn’t that close so Talis Could hear our bird and see us dropping.
Our Mission was about to Start and So it was time for the pep Talk
Listen Boys! As Center have already briefed you about it, Target is High Ranking Commander in TTP and target is Close to inner circle of Mullah Radio (Fazlullah or Radio Mullah) Our Job is to grab him no matter what’s the cost. Is that Clear.
“Yes. Sir” they Shouted and we started moving on long with narrow Curves of this beautiful Hill.
What a Romantic Night it was, Moon at its Fullest Shining and guiding us, After Walking 1 Click I could see the Lights at Target Compound, and we could hear the Generators Noise.
“Comms and Flirs sights up Boys”, I said.
Me! “Khuram Take your position and Take out All the Lights and Outer Ring Guards” we will start in 5 Mintures.
“Rest Scan the Area”.
After 5 Minutes , I heard Khuram Saying “At Position. Targets in Sight, Taking Out 1st Target in
3…
2….
1….
Target Down, and we Saw One of the Tali on the Roof Go down, and Khuram Started to take out Remaining Targets 1 by 1
“Outside of Compound Secure No Living Targets Close to The Compound” He said.
Move in Guys, as We got inside the compound and started to sweep the Area, to check if there was any Target Hiding inside but we weren’t able to find anyone all was clear. Now it was time to Sweep inside of the Two storey building,
“Assad Open the Door, Jad and Khalid You Guys Sweep the 2nd Floor, if You See Anyone Send them to Hell Unless it’s the Target and Leave Some Signs so it will be clear for villager’s that some other Group attacked This Compound”. I said and We moved in the first Floor,1st Room Was full with Smoke of Opium , I could See 4 Guys Lying on the Floor with one Girl whose Body was Lying on the naked on floor with Marks and blood on her Body, I could See Blood in Assad’s Eyes, and see his Bayonet
But i Nodded No with head and singled him to follow me, there was similar story in 2nd Room and now 3rd was the last room remaining as we were about to Go in I heard Jads Voice in My Comms
“We Found the Target But There are 2 Young’s Girls in his room and but there are 2 men in other rooms and girls are not in good condition what are the orders Cap ?”.
Grab the Girls and HVT out of The Room and Only Takeout Those with Silence who are any state to wake up for the Rest of them let them sleep I have a Surprise for them. I checked the 3rd Door a guy was Sleeping with Laptop On and I could see Booze Bottle Sitting There, I took out the Laptop and came back to 2nd Room to see Assad’s Knife Full of Blood, and Talis Gutted in Blood I singled him to take out the Girls and as I was about to Pick up one of the girl she opened her eyes and Saw Fear in eyes I Put My hand on hear mouth and said ssshhh to her and she wasn’t able to Say anything her eyes filled with fear.
When we came out to the main hall, and saw 2 Girl and 1 Fat Mullah, gagged and tied up on the Floor.
I could see the same expression on Jads and Khalids Faces We Put All the girls on one side and I asked Khalid to Find something, so we could torch this place with these Bastards inside.
“What? Are you Serious, and who are these girls?” I heard Khurams Voice in My comms.
“Khalid Do it”. I said Instead of replying to Khuram. Khalid Turned and went to only shed where we saw the generator and fuel canisters earlier, While Khurram was continuously screaming in my Ear.
Jad Tell the Center we have HVT Secured and asked them to send a medic Helo too we need to move these girls to hospital.
Khalid and Jad went to the Second Floor and Started Spreading Oil on the Floor and Khalid and I Did the Same thing on the Ground Floor and locked all the doors from outside.
After Doing that we came back to Floor and Asad lig The Match Stick and The Oil Caught Fire and we could see the fire Running inside the Compound to turn everything into asshes.
We Got in Cover and Our Gun Sights Pointed Towards the Door if some Tali Tried to Run outside we could take them.
Suddenly The Silence was Broken by the Screaming of Talis, they were banging on the doors screaming Whole Compound was in Fire and Ammo cache inside the Building Caught Fire Loud Blasts started to wake up the whole Valley, we see villagers running towards the compound it was Our Que to Run for The LZ. Noises Also woke up two Girls we asked them if they can move 3 where still unconscious. Khalid jad and Asad picked the 3 girls and we started to Running towards LZ. I was supporting two girls were able to move properly.
Story Continues …
Any suggestions ?
@TankMan @Slav Defence @Akheilos @Bratva @Jf Thunder @ranjeet @Selous @Koovie @American Pakistani
@Zarvan@Doordie @Pakistani Exile @Devil Soul @Pakistanisage @I S I @Spring Onion @Super Falcon
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